Sunday, October 27, 2013


Isn't it when you see the beloved's eyes
as sunset and dust
that you really know
how deep in shit
you really are?




1 comment:

  1. ha ha..! Its also depends on how you define shit...!! And if one is honestly looking.. seeing.. into one's beloved's eyes .. oops its not AT sunset... ! ooh then its a cope out...!! i was going to say its an 'art' few learn on earth... well if it AS sunset and dust.. and not dusk... its just the decay... that is quite common really...! Or it may be some high exaltation in meditation.. which i doubt really coz such wouldn't be seen as dust really... more like zipping disappearing atoms.. the creation and distruction of life all at once.. oh well.. life goes on!! Clever poem.. won't quite say its beautiful... but it caught my eye!!

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